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Reluctant Bonds by *Ainohimitsu:iconAinohimitsu:



Magical tenderness alights her skin.
Of grey eyes mourning, she breathes twilight's breath,
and I kiss those lips, beaded with regret.
Never will she fly again, though I want...
        for her to be free of me.  I hear cries  
        of bittersweet longing in her heartsong.
       "Remember when once you were free, my love,"
                     Makeshift joy dances from my soundless tongue,
                     entwining us forever-nevermore.
©2008 *Ainohimitsu
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Another 'm' acrostic. It's a small sentence.

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=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 7, 2008, 12:46:21 AM
small??
nooo,lol
its a big sentence. but a beautiful one:love:

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Writers Block is my arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed. :matrixfight:

Quiet emotion is actually very, very, loud.
RawEm0tion Baby.
*Ainohimitsu:iconAinohimitsu: May 7, 2008, 12:19:51 PM
No the acrostic is a small sentence. The message in the poem... *hintcoughthelettersbeginningeachlinecough* -grins like an idiot- Thanks for the comment! :D

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I'll be someone's inspiration.
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I've prayed for so long to see open skies/With a hope in my heart to finally feel alive~Meiun-Hanashite
=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 7, 2008, 12:27:05 PM
ah..dont know much about that kind of stuff, ill admitt
i do know words...and emotions tho,lolz
you're welcome!!

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Writers Block is my arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed. :matrixfight:

Quiet emotion is actually very, very, loud.
RawEm0tion Baby.
*Ainohimitsu:iconAinohimitsu: May 7, 2008, 12:31:57 PM
Hmm...it's contradicting message. She wants her, yet she wants to let her go...she doesn't want to chain the one she loves...her love is unhappy...but she can't seem to let her go. And her love doesn't have the strength to leave. It's really complicated in this little bit of a poem. An acrostic is a type of poem. In school you might have done one with your name... man I don't know how to explain. I just know I can't tell you what the small sentence in the poem says else I'll give it away to others who might read this. :) If ya wanna know, I'll note you.

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I'll be someone's inspiration.
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I've prayed for so long to see open skies/With a hope in my heart to finally feel alive~Meiun-Hanashite
=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 7, 2008, 12:36:20 PM
lolz, i have attacked by my cat!!!
but ill read it again...i shall perservere and overcome!!lolz
now that crazy cat is curled up and purring....LOUDLY:XD:

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Writers Block is my arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed. :matrixfight:

Quiet emotion is actually very, very, loud.
RawEm0tion Baby.
*Ainohimitsu:iconAinohimitsu: May 7, 2008, 2:22:26 PM
:)

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I'll be someone's inspiration.
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I've prayed for so long to see open skies/With a hope in my heart to finally feel alive~Meiun-Hanashite
~Meiun-Hanashite:iconMeiun-Hanashite: May 8, 2008, 12:42:50 AM
Wow, quite capturing. You do acrostic pieces justice. I really do need to read your work more. Anywho, how have you been?
*Ainohimitsu:iconAinohimitsu: May 8, 2008, 10:41:49 AM
:blush: Thanks for the compliment! It's quite something if it's coming from you... -blushes deeper-

Hm...me? School and financial crap are driving me wacko, but other than that I'm doin' okay. Just trying to find time to breathe I guess. Not lots of time for much else between school and worrying and breathing. ^^;

How have you been doing?

I'm getting around to commenting on your latest pieces. :)

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I'll be someone's inspiration.
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I've prayed for so long to see open skies/With a hope in my heart to finally feel alive~Meiun-Hanashite
~Itchitaka:iconItchitaka: May 10, 2008, 2:16:10 PM
A wonderful acrostic piece packed full of meaning an emotion. I really like it. :)

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting." -Naota (FLCL)

"What's this?! I sense a main character inside Bakura's millennium ring!" -Pegasus

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