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Free in Your Love by *Ainohimitsu:iconAinohimitsu:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Song


No matter where I walk
No matter where I fly
No matter where I fall
I'll be there with you

I stumble in your arms
I heal against your chest
I hear your heart beating
I smile, for I rest...

I rest in someone else's strength.

It's hard to lift my head
It's hard hiding my tears
It's hard being alone
But, now, I have you here...

You're here and in my life, baby.

No matter where I walk
No matter where I fly
No matter where I fall
I'll be there with you

I breathe your breath, feel you...
I feel you beside me,
beneath me...I love you
I'd lose my sanity
without you here, baby

No matter where I walk
No matter where I fly
No matter where I fall
You'll be right there with me...

Right there and free with me.
©2008 *Ainohimitsu
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Submitted: May 19
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Author's Comments

Ughhhhhh. This is the worst thing I've written in a long time... it's like pop music horror. And it's fluffy romance. -groans- Why I am posting it? Because maybe one day I'll come back and fix this atrocity.
Anyway, written for RawEm0tion's theme this week: Freedom.

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~AbyssinianMaid:iconAbyssinianMaid: May 20, 2008, 5:37:58 PM
everyone has to write something sappy once in a while, it gets all that funny stuff out of you. lol
I like this piece though,
Very well done.

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Learn from your past, but don't let it control you.
*Ainohimitsu:iconAinohimitsu: May 22, 2008, 6:52:06 PM
Yeah, I guess you're right. I am a hopeless romantic underneath all the darker stuff. ^^;

Anyway thanks for your uplifting words. I always look forward to reading comments from you, sweetie. I haven't heard from ya much lately. Hope you're doin' okay.

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I'll be someone's inspiration.
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I've prayed for so long to see open skies/With a hope in my heart to finally feel alive~Meiun-Hanashite
~AbyssinianMaid:iconAbyssinianMaid: May 22, 2008, 7:50:55 PM
There's nothing wrong with being a hopeless romantic and having a dark side. Balance is the key.
I've been dealing with a lot....

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Learn from your past, but don't let it control you.
*Ainohimitsu:iconAinohimitsu: May 25, 2008, 7:35:31 PM
True. Balance is one thing ya constantly have to work with, though. But the effort can lead to great results.

And...I don't know what you've been going through. But I am here if you need to let things go. :) :hug:

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I'll be someone's inspiration.
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I've prayed for so long to see open skies/With a hope in my heart to finally feel alive~Meiun-Hanashite
~AbyssinianMaid:iconAbyssinianMaid: May 26, 2008, 1:56:59 PM
Achieving balance can cost more than its worth sometimes. And if you let more of one out than the other if you are already balanced, you can cause a lot of pain to some you love, even if you don't mean to. and wow, I'm going to shut up cause that's enough rambling.....

I'll note you....

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Learn from your past, but don't let it control you.
*Ainohimitsu:iconAinohimitsu: May 27, 2008, 4:57:16 PM
I can understand the meaning of rambling. :hug:
I'll be ready to receive and reply whenever you do.

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I'll be someone's inspiration.
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I've prayed for so long to see open skies/With a hope in my heart to finally feel alive~Meiun-Hanashite
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